poem

here's a poem i wrote for school, let me know what you think. :)

Sky Diving



Jumping from a plane-
The unforgettable stench of fumes surrounds me.
Freefalling peacefully-
through the off white fluffy clouds.

Trees changing colors far below,
to a deep red and some to goldenrod yellow.
My hair blowing in the cold, harsh wind.
I can barely tell what is below!

Maybe a dark and deadly forest,
or maybe-
a deep blue salty sea.

Hurriedly I open my ugly brown parachute.
The feeling as if I am,
suddenly floating through the thick,
chilly air that surrounds me-
like a big blanket.